One day there was a huge forest that I wanted to go to. The forest was called Abandon territory. The real name of the forest is called the Ghost Forest.
The forest was filled with alot of ghosts that used to be alive. It was 1919 and a huge earthquake happened also a mega tsunami happen. The forest was teared apart from the earthquake and most of the trees were taken down by the tsunami.
16 years later I went to the forest and saw a bike that was placed on a tree. I went near it and got token from some creature. A few days later I was dead...
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 28 November 2018
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Ta loaf lava my name is Asia and I have written this story that is about a forest that had a bike placed in the middle dale of the tree. Hope my writing is all good. The reason why wrote this story was that because it sounds interesting.
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