Apocalyptic/Writing

Write a simple sentence that describes something about the picture.

1. Add adjectives to the simple sentence, to add more detail.
2. Add more language features like similes or metaphors to enhance the sentence.
3. Use topic words directly related to the picture.
4. Use emotive language to create/clarify mood.
5. Paint a clear picture in the mind of my readers and give the reader detailed and specific information.

There was a city.

1. There was a scary abandoned city. 
2. There was a scary abandoned city filled with buildings as big as mountains.
3.  There was a scary abandoned city filled with buildings as big as mountains. The big creepy light poles are out of power
4.  There was a scary abandoned city filled with buildings as big as mountains. The big creepy light poles are out of power. The buildings were also as dark as the colour black.
5.  There was a scary abandoned city filled with buildings as big as mountains. The big creepy light poles are out of power. The buildings were also as dark as the colour black.  The darkness was a disaster to the bright sun.
6.  There was a scary abandoned city filled with buildings as big as mountains. The big creepy light poles are out of power. The buildings were also as dark as the colour black.  The darkness was a disaster to the bright sun.