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Thursday 19 March 2020

100 word challenge

Through the week we have been working on some of our writing, so we decided to make a challenge which is called the 100 word challenge. What we do, is that the teacher gives us names of anything then we have to use the words in our story, and here is some words our amazing teacher gave us......

Black, Banana, Jump, Damaged

Story:
One day there was a Black banana that was bigger than a building. The day the Black banana was introduced to the world, was on February 12th 1815. The Black banana was one of the heaviest bananas in the world. It was now 1934 and the banana started to get old and damaged. Before it was damaged, the spooky banana was transformed into a huge monster that had shocked the world. The banana done one jump and it damaged the world's ground.

2 comments:

  1. Interesting writing challenge, your story sounds like science fiction with giant mutated fruit. Why does Black have a capital letter?

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  2. Very interesting story Aisa, I like how you used a different time period to now. Which of the bananas caused the damage to the ground i was a little unsure about this.

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